Cat Fight
Story line
X used to be Z best friend but then their relation was spoiled by the time Z start to flirt X's son. Then one night X plans to go to warn Z to stop flirting her son. Although actually X's son fell in love with Z's daughter already.
Dialogue
X : Z you are really low, how come you dare to flirt my only son?! he is not even 17 years old!
Z : What do you mean?! i never flirt him! i just try to be kind to my best friend' s son
X : You're a low cat! there is no villain who will admit their bad!
X start to grab Z's hair and the cat fight between them cannot be avoid.
Suddenly their kids who accidentally pass by see them and try to stop them.
X's son : Mamaaaaa!! what are you doing??!! your old enough to not do this childish thing!
X : Quite my son! i just try to protect you from this evil bastard!
Thursday, 4 April 2013
Thursday, 28 March 2013
Wednesday, 27 March 2013
George the Dog - Story telling Assignment
George The Dog
by
Vania Gunawardi
DM2C
George the
clumsy dog is struggling for his owner’s attention, when his owner starts to
play more with her toy robot dog.
FINAL ASSIGNMENT (Grade % )
My Blog:
My Email: v4n_bradpitt@yahoo.com
Deadline: xx Jan 2013
EXECUTIVE SUMMARY:
TITLE: George The Dog
GENRE: Comedy, Action
TARGET AUDIENCE: Family
THE DOMINANT CULTURAL /
SOCIAL ISSUE FEATURED IN MY WORK IS:
LOGLINE:
George
the clumsy dog is struggling for his owner’s (Cindy) attention, when his owner
starts to play more with her toy robot dog (Jason).
SYNOPSIS:
George the clumsy dog has an owner
named Cindy, and they both are really close to each other as they grow up
together. Cindy is really like dog and she has a lot dog stuff with her. One
day Cindy’s parent buy her a new present that is robot dog. Cindy is really
having fun with her new toy and seldom pay attention in George. Therefore
George is trying everyway in order to get Cindy’s attention back to him.
CHARACTER PROFILES
CHARACTER LIST (All
characters)
Key
Character : George the dog
Supporting
Character(s) : Cindy
Villain
(if any) : Robot dog (Jason)
CHARACTER BIO OF KEY
CHARACTER
George
is a clumsy dog that is never thinks further for each action he does. He is 3
years old and has a short fur but dense. He is a brown color dog with a white
dot pattern on it. But because of his action, Cindy always laughs and feels
cheerful. Actually Cindy has another dog besides George, but the other dog
always very fierce and do bad things to George then Cindy decides to give her
another dog to the her cousin. This thing make George loves Cindy so much and
even he always obey with every single thing that Cindy orders to him. In
addition, since Cindy and George grows up together they relation makes them
become very close like the real sibling to each other. So if Cindy got another
dog toy, George will be angry and get jealous of it. Sometimes because of
George’s clumsiness it makes his own disaster but he won’t get stop of it and
never give up.
RESEARCH
Dog’s
animation movie (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WplkcAlf7Y4)
REFLECTION PAPER
Firstly my story came up with a sad
story that actually I want to deliver slice of life message that we needs to
love our pet and never abandoned it, but yet in order to match with my target
audience that is family so I came up with the action and comedy genre so can
fit for little kid and adult as well without changing my key message. And some
more the characters need to have a strong motive to make my story is easy to
understand and yet has a deep meaning on it.
I decide to make my clumsy
character as dog since majority of the kids mostly like dog as their pet and
some more it will be fun to animate animal to make various action with a
exaggerate expression and movement. Moreover the robot-dog that I chose to
create is not an ordinary robot, it is contain animal being behavior on it. So
I hope that make animation for the robot and the real dog will be as fun as the
human movement.
3 ACT STRUCTURE: (in point form below)
|
ACT1 SETUP
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ACT2 CONFRONTATION
|
ACT3 RESOLUTION
|
|
Key Character(s): George
Must-have Info: He is a
clumsy dog
|
Confrontation: When Cindy
goes to school, George is planning to spoil the robot dog
|
Climax (Grand Finale): George
is finally decided to throw Cindy’s biggest dog soft toy on the robot dog
Resolution:
|
|
MOTIVE: to get Cindy’s
attention back to him
|
TURNING POINT: George is
not think further of his plan
|
MOTIVE RESOLVED? Yet
George accidentally having an accident that make him and the robot dog lying
next to each other together
|
|
Conflict/Obstacles: Cindy
play more with the robot dog rather than with him
|
Conflict/Obstacles:
Because of George clumsiness he active the robot dog accidentally and
struggling with it.
Up the Stakes:
|
Moral of the Story if any:
Do not abandon our pet,
because although they are animal but they still alive creature that has a feeling
|
TREATMENT / STORYLINE &
STORYBOARD
One day on Cindy’s birthday, her
parents give her a present that is robot dog because her parents know that
Cindy likes dog so much. Cindy has a dog, named George that is very clumsy and
faithful to her. Although Cindy always order George often but George loves
Cindy because she always fed George. When Cindy opens her present from her
parents she is very happy and exciting because she got new dog stuff.
By the time Cindy received her
present she keeps play with it even give him a name already called Jason and
was take care of it very well even until forget to fed George. George is
starting to get jealous with his owner new pet, and George starts to try to do
something to get her owner’s attention. When Cindy goes to school, George
starts his clumsy plan to make the Jason spoil. Firstly he kicks Jason but then
because of it made from steel material it makes George’s leg swollen. Then
George finds another way that is plug off the Jason’s wire, yet he got electric
shock some more that’s make Jason active. George is shock then he is hiding
behind the bed. After that George is trying to approach the active robot dog,
however the robot setting was only recognize its owner then detect George as
unknown harm thing. So the robot dog starts to attack back George whenever he
approaches. Firstly George takes the robot dog bone-toy accessory to attract
it, unfortunately the bone-toy placed on Cindy’s desk that is too high for him
to reach it. When George is keep jumping to reach it, Jason realize and barking
to him. George is shock then hit the desk, but then the bone-toy drop from the
desk. And eventually he wants to trap the robot dog with the bone toy placed
above of super glue area. When the robot dog detect his bone-toy and approaches
it, Jason can makes its head longer and bite the bone toy so that it no needs
to step on the sticky floor. Finally George decided to do his final attack that
is throwing Cindy’s biggest dog soft toy on Jason. Unluckily when George climbs
toward Cindy’s bed he slips Cindy’s blanket and falls down into exactly on
Jason’s position. George press the off button on Jason and make it lie down
inactive then George got injured on his head because the robot dog’s material
is hard and make him unconscious.
Eventually these two dogs lying
down next to each other and looks very close. When Cindy get back home, she
sees these two lying down next to each other very cute and decided to make them
together forever.
SCRIPT (5min or 5pages)
FADE IN:
ACT 1 (SETUP)
SCENE 1: INT/ EXT – CINDY’S
ROOM / LIVING ROOM / BATHROOM / DINE ROOM – DAY/ NIGHT
George and Cindy are growing
up together until they both seem like sibling to each other. They always spend
their time together. They eat together, take a bath together, and even sleep
together. Although Cindy is always order and scold George, but George always be
faithful and loves Cindy as his best. More over George clumsiness attitude
often make Cindy in trouble but also make her laugh.
SCENE 2: INT– CINDY’S ROOM –
DAY
One day on Cindy’s 5th
birthday anniversary, her parents are giving her present Cindy who is very
exciting direct tries to open the present and found that the present is the new
edition of Robot Dog. Cindy is very happy seeing her favorite stuff, yet George
seems not really happy of it.
Father and Mother
(Go approach Cindy while
holding birthday cake)
(Singing happy birthday
song)
Cindy
(Surprise and Happy)
(Cannot hide her smiley
face)
George
(Exciting)
Guk..!! Guk..!!
Mother
(Giving the present to
Cindy)
Happy birthday dear, hope
you will always be my lovely girl
Cindy
(Nervous and Exciting)
Waw…!! Thank you mommy..!! I
Love you…
Cindy is opening her new
present quickly and George looks very happy seeing Cindy happy as well.
Cindy
Ohh yeahh..!! it’s a new
limited edition of Robot Dog!! Mommy Daddy, I love u so much.
George
(Looks confuse why got
something looks similar as him)
Cindy
(Playing her new thing)
This is just so great
George! I hope two of you can be friend.
George
(Disagree)
Guk..!! Guk..!!
SCENE 3: INT– CINDY’S HOUSE
– DAY/ NIGHT
However day by day passed Cindy
seems to having too much fun with her new Robot Dog, and even forget to fed and
go bring George out. Some more they spend a lot of time together instead of
spend with George. That is why George looks unhappy of it.
Cindy
(Playing with her Robot Dog)
(throwing the ball to the
air)
Come on Jason! Catch the
ball!!
Jason
(Direct fly toward the air
and grab it)
Cindy
(Surprise and amazed)
Woah..!! You very skillful
Jason!
Come try to catch this time!
George is upset because
Cindy seems play with Jason more, and then tries to catch attention of Cindy.
George
(Tries to catch attention)
Guk..!! Guk..!!
Cindy
(Seeing George)
What happen George? I fill
your bowl already. You can eat anytime, as you like.
George
(Keep barking)
Guk..!! Guk..!! Guk..!!
Cindy
(Confuse)
Is there something wrong
George??
George
(Staring at the ball that
Cindy is holding)
Cindy
Ohh I see, you also want to
play catch the ball is it??
George
(Shaking up and down of his
head)
Cindy
(Exciting)
Ok! Now we have two
competitors here. Let’s see who can catch this time!
Cindy is starting to
throwing her ball and throw as high as she can. Then George looks does not want
to loose to his new rival.
George
(Quickly running toward the
ball with all hi power)
Jason
(Plainly face)
On the way to catch the ball
suddenly George is seeing the cat and turn away from his proper direction. Yet
he realize that he shouldn’t go that way and when he realizes, Jason is far in
front of him already therefore he directs think idea to make him catch the ball
first.
George
(Seeing around him)
(Staring at bicycle that is
coming from far)
George is got an idea to put
his body on the bicycle then he can run faster. Yet when he wants to jump
inside the bicycle he cannot reach the pedal and the falling down. Eventually
Jason is reaching the ball already and give it back to Cindy.
Cindy
(Amazed)
(Hug Jason)
Woah..!! well done Jason,
you can beat George in this kind of thing
George
(Bow his head)
….
SCENE 4: INT– CINDY’S HOUSE
/ CINDY’S ROOM – DAY
One day as usually Cindy
needs to go to school in 8am until 2pm. Cindy is saying her goodbye to George
and Jason. Then starts to walk outside the house and go in her school bus.
George decided to have plan that make him and Cindy’s relation come back as
usual. Firstly he is kicking George but then he is the one who feel pain.
George
(Approaching the Robot Dog)
Guk..!! Guk..!!
Jason
(Plainly face)
George
(Kicking Jason)
(Pain)
Auuunnggg….!!
George is planning to make
the Jason spoil then he staring around Cindy’s room to find something that can
be use for him to do his action. Then he found wire that connected to Jason.
George
(Staring at Jason’s wire
charger)
(Approach Jason slowly)
George quickly bite the wire
harshly, unfortunately the electricity still in on mode so he got electric shock.
Yet it makes Jason actives, but Jason only recognize his owner and will be
fierce to any other thing. So George wants to take Jason’s bone toy to trap
him. Unluckily he falls down and so that the bone toy as well.
George
(shouting pain)
Auung… Auuunngg…!!
Jason
(On mode)
Wrrroookkk…!!
George
(Aiming on the bone toy)
(Climbing to the top of a
desk to take the bone toy)
(Falling down)
(Throw the bone toy on the
super glue area)
Jason
(Recognize George existence)
(See the bone toy)
(Make his head longer and
grab the bone toy)
George
(Speechless)
SCENE 5: INT– CINDY’S HOUSE
/ CINDY’S ROOM – DAY
Finally George is angry and
decided to use the most violence way. He is planning to drop Cindy’s biggest
dog’s soft toy on Jason’s head.
George
(Angry)
(Climbing into Cindy’s bed)
Jason
(Playing with his bone toy)
George
(Slip in the Cindy’s
blanket)
(Falling down)
Gukk… Gukk..!!!
Jason
(Playing with his bone toy)
…
But then when he climbs to
Cindy’s bed, George slip in Cindy’s blanket and directly fall into exactly
Jason’s head and press the off button in Jason. Eventually two of them seem
like sleeping happily next to each other. A while after that Cindy is coming
home, and see them very close.
Cindy
(Entering her room)
(Seeing George and Jason)
Woah, two of you looks very
close it’s like Jason is the real alive dog…
Cindy
(Smiling)
Maybe I should place Jason
on George place so you two can be together anytime
Wednesday, 20 February 2013
1.tvc's (assorted ads)
link: http://youtu.be/1VYWmdMUe9g
Amora Ketchup
Visual :
old style (black & white), color on the product, old graphic style
first frame showing the lady and the guy is working together, then the lady is having her dinner then she puts the sauce a bit on her plate but end with big impact
character appearance ( the lady wearing that kind of glasses - geek type)
Audio :
cricket sound - at night
Bangkok Insurance
Visual :
Having a twister (destroying the house), family's upset face
Audio :
twister's sound, family's member shout
Berlitz School Language
Visual :
A man working in ship's signal, got a ship almost sinking and ask for help
Audio :
the man asking for help speaking english
the signal guy does not understand english well
Mountain Dew
Visual :
A general kung fu scene (got stairs, on the mountain, the scenery), a man who wants to learn how to twist the hand in a fast way to beat the master
when the time come the man offer the can drink to the master but twisted it so the master cannot have it
but yet the master still faster than him
GAP
Visual :
Everybody destroy the place
Audio :
destruction sound effect
2. bugs & coyote - "operation rabbit"
link: http://www.wimp.com/funtoon/
Visual :
Coyote who tries to eat Bugs Bunny made an effort in every way to do it, yet end up with failure
Audio :
coyote voice, bugs bunny voice, explosion sound effect, cooking sound effect
3. Tom & Jerry
Visual :
Jerry chasing tom all along the show
1. Monty Python - Ministry of Silly Walks
Link: http://youtu.be/wippooDL6WE
link: http://youtu.be/1VYWmdMUe9g
Amora Ketchup
Visual :
old style (black & white), color on the product, old graphic style
first frame showing the lady and the guy is working together, then the lady is having her dinner then she puts the sauce a bit on her plate but end with big impact
character appearance ( the lady wearing that kind of glasses - geek type)
Audio :
cricket sound - at night
Bangkok Insurance
Visual :
Having a twister (destroying the house), family's upset face
Audio :
twister's sound, family's member shout
Berlitz School Language
Visual :
A man working in ship's signal, got a ship almost sinking and ask for help
Audio :
the man asking for help speaking english
the signal guy does not understand english well
Mountain Dew
Visual :
A general kung fu scene (got stairs, on the mountain, the scenery), a man who wants to learn how to twist the hand in a fast way to beat the master
when the time come the man offer the can drink to the master but twisted it so the master cannot have it
but yet the master still faster than him
GAP
Visual :
Everybody destroy the place
Audio :
destruction sound effect
2. bugs & coyote - "operation rabbit"
link: http://www.wimp.com/funtoon/
Visual :
Coyote who tries to eat Bugs Bunny made an effort in every way to do it, yet end up with failure
Audio :
coyote voice, bugs bunny voice, explosion sound effect, cooking sound effect
3. Tom & Jerry
Visual :
Jerry chasing tom all along the show
1. Monty Python - Ministry of Silly Walks
Link: http://youtu.be/wippooDL6WE
GENRES : comedy
CHARACTERS (IN SITUATIONS) :
CLICHES
STEREOTYPES : silly people
THEMES / KEY MESSAGE
MAKING ABNORMAL NORMAL
STORY DESIGN
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