Sunday, 23 September 2012


SHONAIL

Logline :

A boy that cursed by his father has to win against the other animals on race match.

Storyline :

Once upon a time there was an old poor carpenter named Ben lived with his the only son. They have lived in the middle of mountain in order for Ben to get woods easily. Ben is really poor, even he cannot fulfill eat three times a day. Because of his family condition, Ben’s son named Sho becomes a very ungrateful and faithless son. Sho never helps Ben working or even a single simple thing for help Ben.
One day, Ben is cutting the wood to make firewood for them and suddenly Ben feels not well because his weak old body. Ben is calling Sho for help because if they do not make the firewood, tonight will be a cold night for them to survive. But Sho rejects him immediately and mocks him by saying “You are very un useful parent, you even cannot make my stomach full yet you ask me to do something!”. Ben who heard that is really angry that time and curse him into a snail. However there is still a way for Sho to break the spell, he has to ask an animal in the forest to have a race with him and he must win the race in order to break the spell.
Therefore Sho goes to the forest and find whoever who wants to have a race with him as a snail. Firstly Sho is looking for a weak look like animal, so at least he got a chance to win. Then he choose ant as his opponent, but then when he ask the ant to have a race match with him, he got tricked by the ant that is helpful with each other. Every time the ant is left behind Sho, the other ant is cover up by stand by in front of Sho. At last Sho lost to the ants.
After that Sho is finding another opponent for him. Then he chose a turtle to have a race match with him, after that the turtle ask him with his irritating voice what is his benefit if he wins the match. Sho tells him he will provide the food stocks for him during the winter. But then the turtle rejects him and says he does not want that kind of thing, but he wants Sho is stay forever to become his butler. At the beginning Sho feels indecisive with the turtle offers, but he has no choice if he wants to turn back into human again.
Then the race is starting. Sho is crawling as fast as he can, as did the turtle. Unexpectedly those creatures are crawling so slowly and even we can see worm is faster than them. Even the narrator is tired of waiting they are crawling until the finish line. When Sho is crawling seriously, in a distance seen an eagle is flying towards him like he wants to eat him. Suddenly snail inner power is come out in urgent circumstance. Yet, no matter how fast snail is running, of course eagle can catch him. The turtle whose having match with him is startling by it.
Suddenly Sho remembers what his father always says that when snail can go out from his shell when they wants to poo. So, Sho forces his body power to poo and make himself go out from his shell. After that Sho finally be able to go out from his shell and he thrown from the eagle grip. Afterward Sho is falling down right in front of finish line. The turtle is startling fro the second time seeing Sho is right in front of finish line eve though the turtle is almost close to it.
At last Sho wins, and he turns back into normal. The turtle is startling again for the third time seeing Sho change into human. At the end Sho is running back into his house and apology his father for what he has done.

Wednesday, 19 September 2012

This is the first video of my 3d character design. Hope will get better next time!

Sunday, 2 September 2012

What kind of heroes/ heroines do you like?


  • i like heroes such as Sora in kingdom hearts, viking's background, heroes/ heroines that got speed ability, and also any characters that played by johnny dep.


What kind of villains do you like?


  • i like joker as villain, he is absolutely mad.


What kind of stories do you enjoy? Why?


  • Fantasy, develop a lot of my imagination.

Sunday, 26 August 2012

The Screenplay (Script)


slugline = INT/ EXT, location, time of day (add-on specifics, eg 1920's , flashback,, moving car, dream)

INT/EXT = INTERIOR, EXTERIOR (location)

action = describes necessary details (AV) and what is happening at the moment

AV= AUDIO/ VISUAL

character name (dialogue) = always in caps

parentheticals (in brackets) = how the dialogue is being said

dialogue = what is spoken by actors




Monday, 20 August 2012

Simpsons : Homer's night out

1 sentence story idea
spy camera that bart bought being his father's trouble

1 sentence plot summary
spy camera that bart's bought make a trouble for his dad, and his dad try to apology his wife because of that photo

Synopsis
Bart bought a spy camera, and he brings it when his dad has a night out with his workmate. When bart pass by he looks his dad is dancing and make a fun with a girl, then bart is capturing that moment. However Bart cannot keep that photo and that photo is spread around. When Homer's wife knows it she really mad and shoo homer. Homer seek of his wife apology by proving to bart that woman also human that cannot be played.

3 act structure
ACT 1

Key Characters : Homer
Motive : he wants his family back
Situation : bart taking his picture when he was make a fun of woman

turning point 1 :  go back home and ask marge forgiveness

ACT II

Conflict : Homer must proof to bart that woman also human that cannot be played in order to seek maggy's apology

turning point 2 : when homer realize what should he does and stop the music.

ACT III

Climax He also dancing with the others dancers
Outcome : he decides and realize what should he does there
Resolution : Homer speaks in front of the night club stage that woman is also a human that we should respect

Sunday, 12 August 2012

FRASIER

1 sentence story idea : frasier's trying to be a good son

1 sentence plot summary : Frasier Crane start his new life but his father moving into his house because they both cannot be honest with they true feelings.

Synopsis :
Frasier Crane the guy who just encounter failure in marriage moving into a new apartment, and suddenly his father who is an old stubborn man also moves into his new house. His life becomes complicated because his father is a stubborn and has a short tongue type and Frasier is a impatient type also, so there is always a misunderstanding between Frasier and his father.

Character Bio

Frasier Crane : impatient, funny

Father : Short tongue, egoism, childish

Brother : perfectionist, ignorant

Frasier's workmate : firm, wise

3 Act Structure
ACT I

Setup up : Frasier who's having problem with his life
Key Characters : Frasier, frasier's workmate, frasier's father, frasier's brother, the nanny
Motive : Frasier not really sincere to take care of his father try to being responsible to take care of his father
Situation : Frasier's father is a egoism and short tongue type and both always arguing

turning point 1 : Frasier tries to yield

ACT II

Conflict : his father hire a nanny who is request to stay at Frasier's house but at this point Frasier is cannot yield again and cancel the maid and the both really in angry temper at this time

turning point 2 : Frasier vent his problem with his father to his workmate

ACT III

Resolution : Frasier's father tell the truth about his feeling to his son through frasier's radio's program




Saturday, 11 August 2012

3 ACT STRUCTURE EXERCISE


IT'S MY LIFE

ACT I 
Key Character : guy
Motive : the guy has promise to meet his friend in 5 minutes
Situation : the guy is in hurry to meet his friend

ACT II
Conflict : the guy meet so many obstacle in his way to meet his friend such a chase by a dog, almost hit by u truck, etc

ACT III
Resolution : the guy was successful get through the obstacle and finally meet the girl

SNOWMAN
ACT I
Key Character : the snowman
Motive : he wants to get out from his cage to join the other party
Situation : the cage always being his obstacle

ACT II
Conflict : the snowman use all his ways to get out from there

ACT III
Resolution : Definitely he cannot get out


FANTASIA 2000 - FLAMINGO

ACT I
Key Character : the flamingo
Motive : He only wants to play yoyo
Situation : his group is dancing so the flamingo also must dance

ACT II
Conflict : the flamingo try to run away from his group 

ACT III
Resolution : the flamingo successful to tie up all his group with his yoyo and he still can play his yoyo


FOR THE BIRDS

ACT I
Key Character : the big bird
Motive : he wants to join the little birds
Situation : the little birds mock his appearance

ACT II
Conflict : the big bird approach the little birds 

ACT III
Resolution : the little birds fly away and made their feather fall out

JURRASICFART

ACT I
Key Character : the big dinosaur
Motive : he wants to teach about fart
Situation : he teach little dinosaur and piggy

ACT II
Conflict : the piggy's fart goes to the big dinosaur

ACT III
Resolution : the big dinosaur faints